Diplomatic Tone for Better Business Communication. Tip #4 Rephrasing
Achieving a more
diplomatic tone can sometimes be as simple as rephrasing or rewording your
message. You can do this by focusing less on the problem and more on the
positive actions that you are taking to solve the problem.
Rather than: Our
computer system is down. We are not sure how long it will take to fix.- Наша
компьютерная система отключена. Мы не знаем, сколько времени потребуется, чтобы
решить проблему.
Say: Our computer
system is down. We’re now working on fixing it and hope to have it back up as
soon as possible. Thanks for your patience.- Наша компьютерная
система отключена. Сейчас мы работаем над решением проблемы и надеемся, что она
будет восстановлена как можно скорее. Спасибо за Ваше терпение.